Hello, world! This blog is going to be about my information report on Jacob Sartorius and the grades I got for it!
In the beginning, I had a very bad conclusion that did not follow the rubric of having a good conclusion. I didn’t state a reason why I chose that topic. But now, I have a way better conclusion compared to the previous one because I stated why I chose that topic and I made it longer.
Next time I should have put more colour into my eBook so that it’s not boring and bland. I should also add some more information and research deeper into the internet instead of just relying on google (looking into his YouTube channel to watch his All About Me video).