Comments for BQ Blog

Comment on Fort by Phat

Phat — Tue, 15 Jan 2013 04:45:19 +0000

Your post was very good and you explain the steps. But you could make the story longer.

Comment on Fort by Ka Roi

Ka Roi — Fri, 11 Jan 2013 03:40:58 +0000

Your project is really cool. I liked how you explained how you made it and what inspired you. And the fact that you made cannons that is so cool!

Comment on The War by:BQ by Phat

Phat — Mon, 10 Dec 2012 06:57:02 +0000

I think the recording and the story was good. But some of the sound effect are a bit long so I think you need to double check it.

Comment on The War by:BQ by Tao Chen

Tao Chen — Mon, 10 Dec 2012 06:56:45 +0000

I like your story and the most funniest part in your story was when Neo and Faiaz were laying on top of you. you should of spoke in a loader voice. I like your sound effects it sounds like i was in your story it’s very descriptive.

Comment on The War by:BQ by Seungsu

Seungsu — Mon, 10 Dec 2012 06:49:42 +0000

Nice idea of invading Vietnam…But if it is a war, isn’t there going to be a Victory? By the way, If there is more dialogue, it will be 98.8889% awesome.

Comment on The War by:BQ by Neo

Neo — Mon, 10 Dec 2012 06:42:55 +0000

Cool story , the sound effects were cool, but I think you missed some parts of the story.

Comment on The Epic Fight by Seungsu

Seungsu — Tue, 16 Oct 2012 07:13:01 +0000

nice… bq. nice story. But there are a lot of spelling mistakes.

Comment on Reading Respond by Barbara

Barbara — Thu, 17 May 2012 22:04:31 +0000

Hi B.Q.

It sounds like you enjoyed that book about F.D.R. and you learned a lot. I would like for you to re-read what you have written and correct just some small spelling and grammar errors. When you publish something on a blog you want to do that as your entry is public for everyone to read. You might consider revising your ending a little to add a few more details why you think that.

Also it is called a Reading Response. So please change that title name too.

Good job.- Mrs. W

Comment on Reading Respond by Barbara

Barbara — Wed, 09 May 2012 10:26:31 +0000

B.Q.

Please reread what you have written as there are many spelling errors in your response. I think the response you wrote on your Google Doc would be a better if you either added more or included the entry you showed me on your google doc. today. I will look for a change soon.

Comment on Reading Respon by Barbara

Barbara — Wed, 11 Apr 2012 07:33:06 +0000

B.Q. I learned a lot of cool information about the Beatles from reading your Reading Response. It sounds like you learned a lot from reading that book. Remember to reread what you write before you publish your entry. You have a number of little mistakes that I know you can fix on your own, if you reread your response.