Comments for Voices In My Head

Comment on Illegal Logging by Manh Hung

Manh Hung — Wed, 16 May 2012 03:23:08 +0000

Great Job, I liked your writing because you don’t just talk about your article, you talked about how it is affected in the world.

Comment on BP Oil Spill = Seafood Genocide by Seung Un

Seung Un — Thu, 03 May 2012 02:36:08 +0000

I like how you added that some people might think that fish might gain super powers. You did a good job explaining your opinions in the post.

Comment on The future has arrived! by Manh Hung

Manh Hung — Thu, 12 Apr 2012 07:10:13 +0000

I think you post was very creative, I think your connections was interesting and creative, I actually connected to the same thing. Overall this post was good, there are some grammar mistakes but the writing was very clear and fluid.

Comment on Drop the guns and end the fights! by Joane

Joane — Mon, 19 Mar 2012 03:52:06 +0000

nevermind u posted a picture.

Comment on Drop the guns and end the fights! by Joane

Joane — Mon, 19 Mar 2012 03:51:31 +0000

i agree that he’s a tyrant in ur POV. i like your questions, likewise you said the children aren’t suppose to shoot when they are force to. They only wouldn’t feel guilt to kill their own parents. They will feel like they had made a bad sin nd will remember it for the rest of their lives. I like how you bolded really strong points that are really ridiculous. I would like you to describe more on the bolded parts and include graphics, overall, it’s really good. (:

Comment on Facebook the spyware? by Seung Un

Seung Un — Fri, 17 Feb 2012 01:19:39 +0000

I think you did a good job telling the reader most of the information in the article. I really liked how you talked about SOPA in your blog post too. Good job!

Comment on Equiano’s Passage to America by Victor

Victor — Wed, 08 Feb 2012 05:06:31 +0000

I really liked how you made the story like a journal entry, and all the sentences were very fluent and had no grammar mistakes as well. You also got very accurate information about his life while being on the ship to America.

Comment on Algebra Stress Level by Ho Sung

Ho Sung — Mon, 06 Feb 2012 04:05:49 +0000

I think you wrote about your story about stress. It is good how you wrote the percentage of stress you have in class for Algebra. I didn’t know you would have 75 percent for the materials he brought and 56 percent of the materials he don’t understand. So are you talking about 1 assignment each? Because if I add them up it would be 131 percent of percentage. Nice blog post

Comment on Algebra Stress Level by So Hee

So Hee — Mon, 06 Feb 2012 04:03:22 +0000

Billy, I think your post was REALLY straight to the point.:) However, I think it would be nicer if you have explained about the graph, your post would be effective. So maybe improve on focusing the graph and your connection, instead of connecting your class time. Anyway, it’s really neat! Great Job!

Comment on Algebra Stress Level by Anh

Anh — Mon, 06 Feb 2012 04:02:48 +0000

Hey!! I like how you connect it to yourself and actually talked about what percent your stress level is at.