In our ITC class we are writing a adventure story, me and my partners wrote a story about 2 couples that were lost in the middle of the mountain. And in humanities we were to make a video to make people want to read our story
Video:
Our video might be confusing, but we tried or best:
Lost in the Middle of Nowhere
Story:
“Rrriiiinnggg” the school bell was ringing. Ashley and Pauline got out from class.
“It’s Summer, why don’t we go climb the mountains, you and I?” asked Ashley.
Pauline replied, “Yeah sure, do you want to invite our boyfriends too?”
“Sweet!! I LOVE THAT!”
When Ashley and Pauline, talked to their boyfriends, they agreed. So, when they met at the mall, then they went straight to climb the Ranost mountain adventure. When they arrived at the mountain, to check that they were ready, they had to get their stuff, such as, axes, ropes, crampons, belts, tents, and helmets. When they’re halfway on the mountain, they decided to sleep because it was getting dark. They made a fire and set up their tents.
The next morning, when Isaiah, Pauline’s boyfriend woke up, he knew they were lost, they didn’t even bring a map or GPS. He instantly woke the others up, “We’re lost! Come on, let’s start packing and go down the mountain.” They didn’t know where to go, so they decided to split up into groups.
When Pauline and Isaiah walked on the right path, Ashley and Ashton went on the left. Because both couples wanted to know which way to go down. When Ashley and Ashton was looking for the right path, they saw a forest from above the mountain so they knew that was it. So they wanted to find Pauline and Isaiah to tell them that they thought they found the way.
When Pauline and Isiah was on the right side of the mountain, they had thought that it was the way out too. When they were finding the way they wanted to find the others, so when Pauline and Isaiah tried to find the other couple they just went straight down to the mountain’s path, and turned left, and found the Ashley and Ashton.
So, at the end both couples met. And Pauline and Isaiah said we found the way! And the other couple said no, and both couple explained that the right path is the way while Ashley and Ashton said no. When the argument had gone too far, Pauline and Isaiah had to do something about it. They thought if they just let Ashton and Ashley go their own way to the left, the argument would end.
When Ashton and Ashley had gone to the left path, Pauline and Isaiah went to the right path. Then all of a sudden, Pauline heard Ashley shouting and told Isaiah, when they went to saw what was going on, the left path they went was the dead end, not the path that was left that when they were searching for. They saw Ashton falling on the dead end. When Pauline and Isaiah had went to help. It was too late and saw both couples dead. They figured out that Ashley was pulling Ashton up but then a rock from above had fallen and hit Ashley’s head.
Not long before they heard the helicopter coming for them. When the helicopter had saw them, it got down the mountain and rescued them. Especially the dead couple, while Pauline and Isaiah was crying that they had lost their best friends. They knew they had to tell their parents too. When they got back to their home, they went directly to Aston’s house and told Ashton’s parents. Ashton’s parents got shocked and couldn’t believed it at first. After that they went to Ashley’s home, to tell Ashley’s parents, and it was the same reaction. Both of Ashton and Ashley’s parents cried. And they did not lived happily ever after!
By Tina, Jarynth, and Hayeon
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In this story I’m very proud of the way we ordered the plots of the story, the ideas we thought about them getting seperated into two, and how they got recused.
