Personification Writing (Anger)
Thursday May 24th 2012, 3:27 am
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Anger wears all different kinds of dark colored cloths because he is very dark and he doesn’t like bright things. He doesn’t like being bothered because he is a very quiet but when he is really angry he is explosive. Anger likes fighting a lot so he is a part of the gangsters so he stays up late at night in the streets just to fight such people as drunk men.

Anger has a attitude to fight and Anger is very stubborn. Anger is very useful too because if you are too kind and never be Angry. People will start thinking you really weak and even some people will try to bully you because they think you are weak and not going to fight back. So we should have some Angriness in us so we do fight back when it is needed. Angriness is full of fire, people who are in a case where they are Angry everytime it is like they are having fire around them everytime like they are in h+e with double hockey sticks. So people should know how to use the Anger in them but they should know how to use it wisely.



Personification Writing Reflection
Thursday May 24th 2012, 3:20 am
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There was a writing assignment which was a step by step challenge for me. This assignment let me figured how I was a good writer and how I was a bad writer. While I was writing the assignment I didn’t have any ideas so I got out my brainstorm and read it so that I can have my assignment. finished. This writing assignment made me a little bit figure I was a good hooker for a writing piece, but it also made me figure I have a lot of ideas in my mind what to write but I can’t express it that well. If I was to start this assignment again I would try to put all the ideas I have in mind so the writing piece would be longer than I had last time and I want to be a better reviser too.



Govts urged to protect women workers (Kuala Lumpur)
Thursday May 17th 2012, 2:35 pm
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Have you ever thought you were born a women in a poor country? I just read an article about Women’s Right because I’m am working on Women’s Right in my Humanities class. Lets get further into the story about this article.

This article was a hard article for me, there were many vocaublaries I didn’t understand and the sentences were hard for me to understand too. But I’ll tell you guys as much as I know. So this article was about women working like a man does. But there was a really big difference between women, man working. Women get raped, tortured in the poor countries where people think that women are not worthy. These people that are News writer tries to stop this behavior by getting governments attention. The women workers were working until they had no access to the legal material, and rather not working most of their time, they got torchured more often.

Women’s Right should stop this instinct because, is there a huge difference between women and men? Men that treats women not so meaningfully should have a punishment such as going to jail for 1 years so they know what mistakes they had made.



You Can’t Ask For That Writing
Friday May 04th 2012, 2:26 pm
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        Once there was a couple who loved each other more than anyone.The couple, Laura and Jack, was the best couple in the city they lived in. The other couples and adults were all  jealous of their loving relationship. Over the time, their relationship started to become weaker and weaker. Laura, however, still loved Jack really much, so she kept trying to change the weird occasions into happy and loving situations. One day, a war started. Jack had to leave Laura to fight at the battle. Because Laura really loved him, she followed him to the army base where he was stationed. When the actual violent war started, there were guns shooting all over the place. Laura was really scared. Even though she was scared she didn’t want to lose her dear loving boyfriend, so she kept following Jack to the battlefield. While Laura was right next to Jack, she accidentally saw an enemy hiding in the woods aiming at Jack. Laura ran towards Jack and got in between Jack and the gunman. A bullet was fired and Laura was hit. Jack’s fellow soldiers fired back and killed the gunman. Jack’s tears were streaming down on his cheeks like the lonely droplets of late September, but it was too late because Laura was quickly slipping away. Before she died, she told her beloved Jack, “You can never stop my heart from loving you.”

                                              Broken Heart




This article is called BP Oil Spill Aftermath: Eyeless Shrimp, Clawless Crabs and Fish with Oozing Sores written by Al Jazeera. This article is very serious because we may not eat sea foods in the future and there won’t be more sea creatures in the ocean. Sea creatures are being infected by the British Petroleum (BP) oil spill and are becoming zombies. We won’t be able to eat sea foods anymore and who doesn’t like sea foods?

There was a oil spill in 2010 in the Gulf Of Mexico and scientists believe that because of that oil spill a huge population of fishes, crabs, shrimps has been evolved into a monster. People could get disease or be ill by just eating sea foods. If the fisherman are trusty enough and throw away the zombie sea foods we will be healthy and just live our normal life, but if the fisherman doesn’t care about getting us disease and get us ill they should throw away the zombie sea foods and not sell it to the sea foods store. Scientists told BP about the sea foods being deformed but the BP told the scientist the Gulf Of Mexico sea foods are good as normal.

If I has near the Gulf Of Mexico and living there, I would never eat sea foods starting from that day and till there is a result that says it is as clean as before. I would really want to move to another country where I could eat sea foods because I do like sea foods. Or I may get involved with the scientists and try to support scientist and try to help them clean out the sea foods so all the people could start eating sea foods.

 



Dhaka slum dwellers live under threat of eviction (Syed Zain Al-Mahmood)
Monday April 23rd 2012, 3:11 am
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In Dhaka I feel really bad for the people that is living there because they have to live in the streets without any shelter. The government should be more compassionate and help these displaced people by providing shelters until more permanent homes have been found or created. The worse thing is the government broke down over 2000 houses of residents in the Korail slum area of Dhaka. The government intend to build newer and intense houses in this area but the questions is for who? But since the government has torn down these people’s  homes, they should give these poor people a shelter because that was their only house. So now in Dhaka there are thousands of homeless people that are trying to survive until the government does something to help them.



In South Sudan, Girls Are Given Away to Settle Family Feuds (Tom Rhodes)
Friday April 13th 2012, 1:49 am
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In South Sudan there is argument about girls. South Sudan girls should have hard time convincing the boys to not kill anyone. South Sudan has this really weird rules like when you kill someone you have to give the family that you killed one of the women that is your family member to them. This is kind of a weird rule but if you start getting used to it, it wont be so weird. For example why would you kill someone if you know that one of your girl members of the family has to be sent to that family and have a really bad lifestyle. Every family wants to protect the family member not try to make them suffer. So if I think in another hand I think it’s a normal rule because you just have to not kill anyone.



Trayvon Martin’s fatal shooting mirrors 2005 death (Jeff Perlman)
Thursday April 05th 2012, 7:30 am
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From reading this article I learned to not wear a hood around the town Trayvon Martin got shot and I learned to not be greedy, I will start talking about my learning about greediness. So first of all, all the human beings shouldn’t be greedy. I learned even though I really want to have something I have to be careful about having it. The neighbors in this story wanted a towns keeper another way of saying a leader in the city. So they got greedy have someone protect the town, so as soon as Jerrod Miller asked if he could be the leader of the city they probably would have said “yes!” straight away. So because of the towns foolish choice everything became all bad.

Now, I will start talking about the situations that happened in the article. So first when you start reading the article you could tell that Trayvon Martin got shot by someone else. The shooters name was Jerrod Miller, who was the leader of the town with a family. Trayvon was coming back from a shop with bags full of skittles and some sprites. The day was probably cold so Trayvon with a hoodie on put on the hood of the hoodie, while walking back home. When Jerrod Miller saw this man wearing a hoodie, he tried to keep the town safe so he shot him. Police arrived and arrested him but later what Jerrod Miller said was Trayvon tried to attack him so for his family and his self protection he shot him right in the chest. Until now, the result hasn’t come up.



Independence From Reflection
Wednesday April 04th 2012, 5:03 am
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I just wrote a piece of writing about Declaration Of Independence about a students life. In the piece of writing I thought I had strength on speaking to a person. I think my writing is talking to me right now, and I have a strong voice in the paragraph. While writing this piece of writing I had problems finishing this because the topic was hard to understand but later Ms. Richert told me that there are some examples for the topics so the writing became way easier, thanks to Ms. Richert. I was thinking if I could find for some ideas but to tell the truth I didn’t think for a lot of ideas. Ideas just popped up my mind. If I would start over the writing piece I wouldn’t change my piece of writing.



Declaration Of Independence!
Wednesday April 04th 2012, 4:47 am
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Preamble
Us, where we are a teenager should have some independence! These days in my point of view I am getting some independence, BUT there should be more independence. Myy allowance isn’t enough for my point of view and these days everything are expensive. My parents are keep saying if I have too much money I will lose it, and that’s why they aren’t giving me enough allowance. When I get a lot of money from my aunt or all the people where my parents are related, the first thing my mom will say to me is give me the money you will lose it. I need some independence of keeping my own money.

Declaration of Student Rights
Students, even children that are not students are all born the same time and has the same equal of time. Students should have the right in some homeworks, tests, and quizzes. Students sometimes are beaten by their family just because they don’t have good grades. Do the parents ever think of outside the grades? For example other things the student is good at. Students should have a bit more independence on studying and having more of their own time.

List of Grievances
I have some complaints with quite a lot of people. First of all I have complaints with my teachers because they don’t give the same amount of homework every time. For example yesterday they gave me 5 pages to read in a book, and the day after the teachers asks us to review a lot and read a lot of book pages. My next complaint is with my tutoring english teacher. This teacher is very mean and every class I have to be prepared by memorizing 50 words. I mean I can do that, 50 words aren’t a lot of words to memorize in 2 to 3 days BUT the bad thing starts from here. He makes me write 1 word 20 times in a notebook with the definitions so that means the total words I write are 1000. If I don’t memorize the words he makes me suffer by making me exercise but his exercise is a punishment so its a really hard exercise. If I don’t do the exercise well he will either tell my mom but when I take the punishment and don’t do the exercise right he is going to quit the tutoring.

Statements of Prior Attempts to Redress Grievances
I asked my parents to quit a english tutoring long time ago but she just ignored me and said that was the best teacher she could find, and explain how if you learn from this teacher you will get good grades + lots of people got better grades after meeting this person. But to tell the truth I’m not really sure if this man is helping me, I just want to go to a normal academy with my friends. I don’t have any problems with school but I have some problems with my academy’s. I want some independence with my academy!

Resolution of Independence
I want to change the way I could be independence by talking to some teachers and talking to my parents. We have a good middle school counselor I could talk to her about all my complaints and the tiring occasions. So the I kept the tiring and the exhausting times until now, but starting from now! I am going to get some independence!